Phrases like 'bit off more than he could chew' sprung to my mind. The Babylon 5 - Season 4 problem (build up, build up, build up, oh, ermmmm... resolution..?).
It's still, to me, a more interesting piece of work than Rowling;s Potterings, but the plot got quite plainly lost.
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Date: 2005-01-21 09:22 am (UTC)It's still, to me, a more interesting piece of work than Rowling;s Potterings, but the plot got quite plainly lost.